大家帮我分析分析，论文会被接收吗

　　大家帮我分析分析，论文会被接收吗。一审编辑回复
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Dear Prof. ,

Although now, after revision the technical content of the paper may be felt adequate, nevertheless it cannot be accepted for publication because it is full of grammar mistakes.
Therefore Authorsare AGAIN AND MANDATPORILY strongly advisedto have their paper revised for language by a native English or equivalent expert.

Alternatively we suggest you to make use of Elsevier language services:


Authors are asked to write in colour any language improvement made in their revised text.

Authors are advised that regrettably the paper will be definitely rejected if the above is not fully accomplished.


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I look forward to receiving your revised manuscript.

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Dear Prof. ,

Authors appear to havereasonably matched most of reviewers suggestions and comments. Now the paper is acceptable under the technical viewpoint.
However substantial language drawbacks, bot grammar and sentences construction still are present.
Therefore if the Authors want their paper be definitely accepted , it is suggested them to completely rewrite the text with the assistance of a native Englishh speaker.
Alternatively we suggest you to make use of Elsevier language services:


Authors are asked to write in colour any language improvement made in their revised text.


To submit your revision, please do the following:

1. Go to:

2. Enter your login details

3. Click [Author Login]
This takes you to the Author Main Menu.

4. Click [Submissions Needing Revision]

Please note that this journal offers a new, free service called AudioSlides: brief, webcast-style presentations that are shown next to published articles on ScienceDirect (see also

I look forward to receiving your revised manuscript.

Yours sincerely,



Reviewers comments:




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大家帮我看看，如果不使用他推荐的润色公司，自己找个美国老师给修改能被接受吗？
好捉急啊
===有问必答===
好像你的文章还没送审吧？如果你觉得能够把文章的语言问题修改好，也没有必要推荐的润色公司，自己找个英语好的人修改即可。
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写作问题，应该还没有送审。
找个相关领域科技英语写作好的老师帮忙修改下英文
这一关没过是无法送审的。希望对你有帮助
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先改好语言，过了技术审查再说吧！


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只有一个审稿人，内容已经没有问题了，就剩下语言了。
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已经审完了，只改语言了，编辑说内容已经没问题了
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技术审查已过。状态已经从最开始的major revision 变成revise了。
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